Showing posts with label fishing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fishing. Show all posts

Friday, 16 June 2017

Breakfast by the sea- By: Veronica

Learning Intention: we are learning to retell one of the after  Easter stories.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can retell the after Easter stories by drawing a comic strip.

                                  

 1. Peter, John, and James went fishing.

2.  They fish all night but caught nothing.


3.  A man by the shore told them to "throw their net on the other side of their  boat" . When they pulled the net there were lots of fish.


4.  Peter knew it was Jesus so, he jumped into the water and swam to the shore and have breakfast with  Jesus.


                                   

Saturday, 18 March 2017

The day I saved Emily - By Veronica


Learning Intention: we are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, use capital letters and full stops correctly.

Last Wednesday I went down by the river. I  was fishing with my dad. Then we heard a  loud scream. A little girl name Emily  was in the cold water. She was shouting for help and also Emily's mum was shouting for help.

My dad and I went and get a long stick and pulled her out of the cold water. After that Emily's mum said, ''thank you for saving my daughter". We said ''your welcome ".Then we all went home.