Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order,and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
On the holiday I spend time with my grandma and grandpa with my family at Apia Samoa.
When we got there we looked for a house.After we found a house we put our things in our own room.I looked around the house. There was a swimming pool.I shouted "yes".I put my swimming clothes on and I jumped in the swimming pool.I started to laugh, and my grandma and grandpa watched me having fun.
I told my grandma and grandpa and my family that I really had fun at Apia Samoa. I ask "could we come back again? they said " yes". I shouted " Hooray".
When we got there we looked for a house.After we found a house we put our things in our own room.I looked around the house. There was a swimming pool.I shouted "yes".I put my swimming clothes on and I jumped in the swimming pool.I started to laugh, and my grandma and grandpa watched me having fun.
I told my grandma and grandpa and my family that I really had fun at Apia Samoa. I ask "could we come back again? they said " yes". I shouted " Hooray".
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